i'm not sure using the blur effect worked well in the fourth panel. it doesn't match the heavily textured style of your pencils and ink. (inks are getting better btw).
i think that faces are still your biggest weakness in the sense that they don't seem very three dimensional.
i like the grey work in the first three panels a lot. you used the three tones to really good effect (i.e. it's not muddy at all).
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the first three panels are really nice.
i'm not sure using the blur effect worked well in the fourth panel. it doesn't match the heavily textured style of your pencils and ink. (inks are getting better btw).
i think that faces are still your biggest weakness in the sense that they don't seem very three dimensional.
i like the grey work in the first three panels a lot. you used the three tones to really good effect (i.e. it's not muddy at all).
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